TASK-2 PLASTIC BAGS, PLASTIC BOTTLES AND PLASTIC PACKAGING ARE BAD FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. WHAT DAMAGE DOES PLASTIC DO TO ENVIRONMENT? WHAT CAN BE DONE BY GOVERNMENTS AND INDIVIDUALS TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM?

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dreams. In
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different individuals face various problems and learn
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of lessons from their own experiences. I strongly agree with the given statement and I prove my statement with some concrete examples. The
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rate. If a person got the failure
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ford motors rely on the mustang old engine and the company never upgrade the engine with the latest technology
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ford company
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to
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motor company, which is TATA group.
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not good for those who got depression
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. To illustrate
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a knife as well as
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that because of his
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he tried to kill
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. In a nutshell, I opine that life is the only thing, where people can learn different lessons and warn from
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different incidents as well as it will improve the perspective to see the world in other ways.
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