Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in cities.what are the reasons? Do advantages of their development outweigh it's disadvantages

In the recent modern world, the number of young generations who head for metropolitan

areas

seeking

for

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better quality education and higher salary

jobs

has been increasing rapidly. For

this

trend, there are merits as well as drawbacks.

Although

there are a few critical demerits of leaving

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their

ther

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their

home countries, I believe there are more advantages for them to study or work in

cities

. I would like to list both merits and demerits and state my view in

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essay. The

first

reason for them to go to big urban centres is that they can get

better

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education or they can pursue more promising and

high quality

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jobs

.

For instance

, they have more options for famous schools with

high quality

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professors. Or, they can

apply

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jobs

at

multu

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multi

national companies

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salary is much higher than in rural

areas

.

In addition

, crowded

cities

with more diverse citizens are stimulating for the young and they can enjoy

excitement

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of living in

cities

rather than safe but boring rural

areas

.

Moreover

, metropolitan lives can provide them

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networks which they can nurture for the rest of their lives for prosperous futures.

On the contrary

, there are a few

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critical

critial

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critical

disadvantages of living in

cities

. The

first

and the largest demerit for young people who left rural

areas

and come to busy

cities

is its negative impact

to

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their physical conditions.

For example

, there are

less

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trees and fields in city

areas

and

density

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of urbanization may force them to live in small apartments not as comfortable as their homes in regions.

In addition

, the higher crime rate in

town

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can be a serious risk for them. In conclusion, there are both merits and demerits of living in

cities

,

however

, for those young people who seek

for

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good school educations or higher paying

jobs

,

advantages

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of coming out from their home town and making challenges for their future careers obviously outweigh

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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.