Television
is a great discovery
atChange preposition
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science which eventually had vast expansion in the current era. Considering an important part of
human'sChange noun form
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life.
Television
had many
impactChange to a plural noun
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on
children
, and are too
much Correct quantifier usage
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addicted to it. Excessive attachment to T.V for
children
have disadvantage and looking
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the other parts there are
too.
As
television
has become
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for every
individualsChange to a singular noun
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. Potentially it is an ideal machine which
provideChange the verb form
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us bundle
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at our
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.
However
, it comes with many channels for
people
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their respective
oneCorrect pronoun usage
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.
Children
of reading books achieve
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general and
educationReplace the word
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knowledge at home. Images on
television
are clearly understood by them. Kids enjoy their vacations and free time being busy with
itCorrect pronoun usage
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. Many parents live their
alone at home due
theirChange preposition
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job, here
Television
becomes a supportive task for
children
and
areChange the verb form
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safe alone at home. Rather
goingCorrect word choice
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out of their place.
A partCorrect your spelling
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from it they don't feel lonely if they are kept alone at their house.
Television
strongly has many disadvantages unfortunately excess being
to it many spoil one's vision and
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effectFix the agreement mistake
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the eyes. So many
of Change preposition
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kids have to wear glasses from a very tin age. It
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effectsCorrect your spelling
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while Correct word choice
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copying notes from
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onChange preposition
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school.
Secondly
,
children
have forgotten
goingChange the verb form
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outdoorReplace the word
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to play
gameFix the agreement mistake
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.
As a
physical activities are decreasing and obesity in their
is increasing. Having snacks and sitting
atChange preposition
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a Remove the article
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one place for
longChange the article
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time enjoying their favourite channels give them
relishAdd the particle
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and
this
oppositely affects their growth and
pushCorrect subject-verb agreement
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them to become obese.
I would like to conclude that
Finally
Television
is considered
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an idiot box even
itCorrect word choice
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entertains much. Parents must take
inChange preposition
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grantAdd an article
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about their
children
's activities should be done
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a
.
Children
must be explained about the past activities done by their elders
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before there
wereChange the verb form
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no
television
. Parents should take their
children
inChange preposition
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gardenAdd an article
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to have fun with physical exercise too.