It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is notable that many
people
who had a major impact on the world focussed totally on their work
and did not care about distributing work
-life hours effectively. I believe that this
philosophy, which can be called Stakanovism, is completely wrong. People
should know how to manage their time
and acknowledge when is time
to work
and when its time
to dedicate themselves to other life tasks.
Separating work
and life is key to an individual's well-being. This
skill can prevent serious diseases caused by excessive working hours such
as stress, anxiety and other mental health illnesses. It is proven, indeed, that individuals who work
too many hours tend to sleep less, then
they are more fatigued and as a ,
consequence they feel stressed. Remove the comma
apply
This
is a vicious cycle that a person should know when to stop.
Work
-life balance is also
important for the people
who surround you, in fact around us there are family members, friends and other important relations that need time
and attention. If a person does not care about his/her dear one, it is possible that he/she will be left alone. As a result
, the individual will, likely, suffer from other mental health diseases like depression due to his/her addicting attitude to the job.
In conclusion, knowing how to manage our work
-life time
is important for our well-being and also
for the people
who surround us.Submitted by edoardo.rivoli99 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
