You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: -explain why you are interested in helping -Give details suitable past experience -suggest ways you might help with the event.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing

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letter to express my interest in being a part of the upcoming event.

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, I have a strong desire to help people who are in need.

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, through volunteering, I believe that I can perform an active role in society. Let me explain

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. I have been a part of several events in the past that aim to raise funds or visit elderlies and assess their needs.

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last

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year a fundraising campaign was held and fortunately, I had the chance to participate. Eventually, we were able to help 20 families who are in need of shelter and food. would you please consider my application since I feel that can play a vital role throughout the event? My working hours are flexible,

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I'm free to join on a daily basis for four hours.

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, I can use my own car to carry out home visits and distribute food and households for poor people. thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Malak

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

applicant
volunteer
enthusiasm
charity event
community
experience
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promotions
skills
teamwork
responsibility
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