In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tution fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this?

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Going to
university
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has become really expensive,
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students
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and students
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who want to attend higher
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need to pay high tuition fees. These taxes,
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, are unaffordable for many,
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people
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believe that
university
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education
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should be free. I agree with
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opinion because I believe that
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should be
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opportunity for everyone without any difference in their social status. A free
university
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system would lead to a more prepared and more
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selectioned
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selected
society.
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in a utopistic world where
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university
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is free,
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, in my opinion, would be required to pass a precise entry test to get into the college.
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system would be
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, because
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would attend
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courses just thanks to their prior knowledge acquired in
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earlier studies and not cause of their family's wealth.
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, several universities around the world do not require any entry test because of their high tuition fees that a few
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can afford.
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, young
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would be
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to study with free higher
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. In fact, nowadays many feel stressed when they study for
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exams because behind them there is
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huge financial support
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their families.
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, some
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feel guilty towards their
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when they do not get a satisfying result. With free Universities,
students
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would be more relaxed and would look to
University
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education
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as a pleasant opportunity and not as a journey of
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. In conclusion,
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some
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believe that
university
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education
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should be for a few
people
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, I believe that higher
education
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should be affordable to everyone who is able to demonstrate
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the right skills
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this
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hard journey.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equal opportunity
  • higher education
  • educated and skilled workforce
  • student loans
  • graduate
  • debt burden
  • incentivize
  • pursue
  • educational attainment
  • knowledge-based economy
  • social mobility
  • low-income students
  • socioeconomic status
  • economic growth
  • innovation
  • productivity
  • skilled labor
  • overcrowded classrooms
  • quality of education
  • public funding
  • higher taxes
  • reallocation of resources
  • essential services
  • mixed model
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