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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #children #school #age
Educated youth is
every nations backbone
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. Few people believe that
children
 should go to
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school and get the proper
education
 that they need until they get
in
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to
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 the proper
age
, while several people argue that at
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 young
age
 when
children
 started to talk and walk they should be going to school already. In my
opinion
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 there are pros and cons
of
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 both
idea
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. I believe that parents should be the
first
 teacher of
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young
children
. When a
child
 starts to learn how to talk and walk,
this
 is where
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education
 starts.
Education
 is not only about learning how to write, learn the alphabet, solving the mathematical problem, rather
education
 for me is teaching a young
child
 how to socialize,
learn
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 how to get up when she or he fell and correcting a
child
 that it is okay to have a mistake,
the most important is
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but the most important is also
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 to
enculcate
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inculcate
 to their young minds that mistakes are unavoidable since it is
a
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human nature,
however
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 mistakes can be corrected and learn from it. A young
child
that is
 educated at home
in
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the
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 young
age
 will not be vulnerable to
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bullies inside the school since he was taught at home how to face any danger at
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 young
age
. On the other view,
children
that
is
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 older when they
starts
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start
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 schooling,
they
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are already faced
the
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 world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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