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We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion what are some important characteristics of a co-worker? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important?

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Unless you’re in a self-employed business, you will have to deal with people one way or another, whatever the job is or will be! Those co-workers might be completely different and one
advice
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 I will give right away
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 is that one must adapt to other people’s behaviours to carry on the good
work
 and to attain the much-desired success.
However
, as we all know, there are some characteristics that are advantageous right from the start to keep
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great team’s
work
. In
this
 essay, I will highlight some crucial qualities that I personally value when having to
work
 with another person.
To begin
 with, it is obvious that it is very important that the person feels excited and motivated to perform the job. I have never liked to be in a
group
 of ten people where only four care for the
work
 being done.
It’s
 not fair for the other six and
it’s
 very limiting for the whole
group
.
Furthermore
, technical skills are essential to accomplish all tasks required
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according to the established timeline.
It’s
 very relevant that the
work
 is done efficiently! Actually,
this
 is more likely to happen if the person is motivated and is being pushed to do so.
Lastly
, I appreciate one’s empathy and if she or he contributes to a good environment
between
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 the team members. In my view,
it’s
 very important for keeping the cohesion of the
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group
, if everyone gets along and pushes and helps each other when needed. To sum up, from my standpoint, I prefer to
work
 with somebody that feels lucky to have that job, works his or her hardest to have good results and who contributes to a good relationship between the
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