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If you could study a subject you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choise, using specific reasons and details.

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There are some things in life we’re curious about, but because the path we choose doesn’t go through that way, we never really get to learn much about it. In my case, it’s
languages
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! I have always wanted to study
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different
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 like Italian, Russian, German, and many more, but because I followed the scientific field of knowledge, I never had that chance. In
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 choice. As a native Portuguese speaker, my
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, it was an incredible feeling when later there were some English pop songs on the radio and I could sing along too, despite missing the majority of the words. Throughout my school
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 I
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 learned some French, which was very helpful on my holidays at
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 countries and some Spanish, as I didn’t know if I would end up in a Spanish University. Many
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 are missing in my “Curriculum” and I would like very much to improve the ones I have already started to learn as it’s very handy whatever you may go, it allows you to understand many things that are happening in other parts of the world and to communicate with a wider range of people. I would definitely love to learn proper Italian, as well as Russian and German, European
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 that I have never studied. In conclusion, if there was a subject just about learning several
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every school year, I would definitely subscribe and try to be the
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