Some argue today that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Is it argued today that schools are no longer important since

children

can learn from the

internet

and be taught at

home

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This

mode of learning was introduced back from the start of

pandemic

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, particularly Covid virus infestation, which paved

way

for convenient

education

at

home

and at the same

time

, securing the safety of

children

.

However

, various crucial aspects of a child’s mental and social development were being neglected. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will point out that learning in schools is still the best and

effective

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way

of receiving quality

education

than having it at

home

. The fun

way

of face-to-face learning in schools will not be

that

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same

in

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virtual lectures at

home

. One thing that can help a child in retaining knowledge is a motivating environment which is not possible in a

home

study. And without stimulation from a lively environment, eagerness to learn will not be felt and boredom will overpower.

Also

, active participation

as well as active listening

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is limited in online

classes

.

For instance

, everyone wants to speak but not all

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given the chance because of the limited

time

. Conflicts on

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side arise in the practice of online

classes

,

that

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it

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is limited and not even feasible in some rural

areas

.

Internet

connection varies from one location to another. And most of the

time

, it is not yet installed in remote

areas

. In fact, not all people living in

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far flung

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areas

have electricity to start with. And since life there is impoverished, people are more on survival than on embracing modernization in the

way

of

education

.

On the other hand

, the convenience of learning at

home

that is

attained through virtual

classes

helped families in

such

ways that it can save them

time

and effort. With the availability of online

classes

,

children

can stay and learn at

home

with their parents. In

this

mode of

education

, parents can be hands-on in guiding their

children

through their modules

thus

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quality family

time

. In conclusion,

children

attaining

education

through

internet

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at

home

facilitates comfort and bonding among families;

however

,

quality

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of learning is lessened with limitations

such

as an environment not conducive

for

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learning and unavailability of

internet

resources due to location constraints in isolated

areas

. And with these struggles, a child’s learning and social needs are being restricted.