Essay topics: You work for an in the international company. you have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter . Describe the training course you want to do. .explainwhat the company could do to help you. . say how the course will be useful for your job.

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Dear Sir, My name is Shikha, and I am working as an eCommerce developer in our company. I am writing

this

letter to request you to take your permission to do one

course

. Yesterday, I saw an advertisement, that one of the institutes in our city is organizing 4 days Time Management

Course

. So, I was thinking if you could give me short leaves on these days that would be great.

Course

timing is 12PM to 4PM from Tuesday to Friday. I'll hand over all the details of the project to Sudhir, he will work on my project in case of any urgent task.

Furthermore

, I want the company to reimburse me for the amount I'll spend on

this

program. As

this

program will be beneficial for the company

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because I am planning to give training to our team members after completing it successfully,

Moreover

, I am very bad at managing my time on different tasks, which leads to a waste of time with very less output. So,

that is

why I have opted for

this

course

. I hope you'll help me out with

this

and grant me short leaves on those days. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

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7 paragraphs

196 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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