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The best way to solve the traffic congestion in the city is to provide free public transport for 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 in
traffic
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 becomes a grave concern for everyone these days. Some people often think that government need to maximise free public transport regardless of
days
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day
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 and
time
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. I completely agree with
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 viewpoint.
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 point of view.
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 and foremost, it is the utmost step that needs to be taken to
control
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traffic
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 congestion these days.
Traffic
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 on roads is somehow very irritating and disturbing.
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, congestion on roads
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 results in wasting their
time
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 by just waiting in very large cue. These all problems can be controlled wisely by introducing free modes of transportation 24/7.
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, once flexible transportation is all set
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 people will undoubtedly go for it as it would
free
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be free
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 of cost and
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, as there would be a good service so they can reach
at
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apply
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their preferred destinations on
time
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. Adding to
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,
increased
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an increased
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 number of public transport will help to
control
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 pollution on
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 planet. Every vehicle needs fuel to operate that omits gas in the air which is very dangerous for species on earth. So, when people reduce
use
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the use
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 of their own vehicles
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 obviously there would be
a
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apply
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good
control
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on
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of
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 pollution.
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, one bus can take 50 passengers at one point
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in
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time
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that
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which
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 will ultimately reduce the considerable amount of fuel that was previously used by every single passenger for travelling. To conclude, there are
multitude
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a multitude
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 of advantages if
government
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the government
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 took step toward making transportation free of cost at any
time
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. I strongly stand by
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 thought as it will
first
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control
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traffic
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 issues on roads and
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 it will conserve
environment
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the environment
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 of
earth
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the earth
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • public transport
  • personal vehicles
  • infrastructure
  • service frequency
  • sustainable city planning
  • financial implications
  • congestion charges
  • promoting cycling or walking
  • ride-sharing apps
  • smart traffic management systems
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