In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the present day, people prefer

western

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- style of clothing (suits and jeans) over their traditional clothes.

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essay will outline its causes and according to my

viewpoint

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its positive side

outweigh

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the negative side.

Firstly

this

trend came in

affect

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effect

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with the rise of globalization all across the world. Nowadays folks especially youngsters

shows

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keen

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interest in watching imported movies rather than one that belongs to their own culture. By watching western movies they develop

the

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an

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interest

of

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in

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wearing western clothing as it seems to be more comfortable and attractive.

Furthermore

, many companies opt to make

this

style of clothing as their dress because it shows equality regardless of

diversifications

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the diversifications

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of their cultures.

Moreover

demand

of

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for

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western dressing increase

lots of

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apply

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employment opportunities in developing nations. As more stuff needs to be produced because of its high demand so, more plants

needs

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to be operated to deal with increasing expectations of people regarding western dress up these days.

However

, some communities believe that with

rise

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the rise

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of

this

trend their cultural clothes

seems

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seem

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to disappear somewhere. For

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instance

intance

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instance

,

countries

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in countries

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such

as India

that

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which

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is

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well known for cultural diversity,

unfortunately

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people no longer wear their cultural dresses

as a result

, different types of wearing styles has eliminated in

country

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the country

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. In conclusion,

although

rise

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the rise

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of western- clothing takes place in every part of the world

but

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some

believes

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that

this

put

detrimental

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a detrimental

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affect

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on

traditional

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the traditional

a traditional

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form of

dresses

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dress

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.