In the present day, people prefer
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- style of clothing (suits and jeans) over their traditional clothes.
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its positive side
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the negative side.
trend came in
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with the rise of globalization all across the world. Nowadays folks especially youngsters
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interest in watching imported movies rather than one that belongs to their own culture. By watching western movies they develop
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interest
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wearing western clothing as it seems to be more comfortable and attractive.
, many companies opt to make
style of clothing as their dress because it shows equality regardless of
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of their cultures.
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western dressing increase
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employment opportunities in developing nations. As more stuff needs to be produced because of its high demand so, more plants
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to be operated to deal with increasing expectations of people regarding western dress up these days.
, some communities believe that with
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of
trend their cultural clothes
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to disappear somewhere. For
,
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as India
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well known for cultural diversity,
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people no longer wear their cultural dresses
, different types of wearing styles has eliminated in
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In conclusion,
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of western- clothing takes place in every part of the world
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that
put
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on
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form of
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