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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style . What are the advantages of this trend ? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

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the rise of convenience
foods
 has helped people keep up with the speed of modern
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life style
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lifestyle
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. There is becoming increasingly popular to use fast
foods
 and the other product of that to adapt people
with
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fast
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 modern
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lifestyle
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life style
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. there are numerous
of
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advantages and disadvantages to
this
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out weighing
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 the benefits. for the
first
 step of
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, I will accord to the
last
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re searchers
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.
This
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says
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 that the preservatives in the half made
foods
 or
conserves
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 has a horrible effect on
body
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, the sugar in soft drinks are play an axial role in kidney stone and high pressure and some related sickness. By the way of
example
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 my
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grandmother
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grand mother
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grandmother
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 has
high pressure
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 disease and by using soft drinks
every thing
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everything
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 get worth
than
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 ever until she had been brain attack and she was almost dead.
this
 kind of
foods
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food
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 has some positive
point
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 but just when you accept the cons of
this
 subject. Fast
foods
 are so tasty and I do not think someday, can find someone that he says “fast
foods
 has not the good taste”. half made
foods
 and conserves help us to feed fast and save
the
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golden time. But these
foods
 have some issues.
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Any thing
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 has
price
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 to pay and in
this
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scenario
cenario
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scenario
, that price is your health.
This
 is the judgment time, either health body or
save
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 some time. according to what has already been discussed in
this
 essay there are many pros and cons that I can not mention all of them but in my
opinion
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 the negativity of
this
 subject with authority has upper hand just
for example
 my grandfather loves hotdog and
this
 product has a key role in our diets. We eat
hotdog
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hotdogs
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 Too much, my little 12 years old brother is get like
hotdog
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a hotdog
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, tall and thin.
Therefore
, all of my family has trouble with kidney stones.
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