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The table compares three features relating to the size of three subway systems in
London
,
Paris
 and
Moscow
. These features use different measures: length of total track, number of
stations
 in operation and figures of commuters.
Overall
, each subway
systems
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system
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 has
their
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its
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 own strength
holding
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apply
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in different areas.
London
 Underground is the longest subway,
Paris
Metro
 takes the lead in terms of
number
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a number
the number
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 of
stations
 in operation and
Moscow
Metro
 is the most crowded system. In detail,
London
 Underground has a total track length of 408
kilometers
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kilometres
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,
while
Moscow
Metro
 comes second in line with 300
kilometers
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kilometres
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 and
Paris
Metro
 is the shortest one which is characterized by 214
kilometers
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kilometres
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 of track.
On the contrary
,
Paris
 has the most number of
stations
 in operation with 300
stations
, followed by
London
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the London
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 Underground with 275
stations
 and
Moscow
Metro
 with only 182
stations
 is the
last
 one.
Moscow
Metro
,
on the other hand
, is the most crowded one with 6.5 million daily passengers. Even though
Paris
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the Paris
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metro
 has the shortest
metro
 network among the two others, it comes second with 4.5 million commuters.
London
 Underground has only about half as many daily passengers as
Moscow
Metro
 with only 3 million commuters. 18th November 2021
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