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The table compares three features relating to the size of three subway systems in
London
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,
Paris
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 and
Moscow
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. These features use different measures: length of total track, number of
stations
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 in operation and figures of commuters.
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, each subway
systems
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system
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 has
their
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its
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 own strength
holding
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apply
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in different areas.
London
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 Underground is the longest subway,
Paris
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Metro
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 takes the lead in terms of
number
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a number
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 of
stations
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 in operation and
Moscow
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Metro
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 is the most crowded system. In detail,
London
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 Underground has a total track length of 408
kilometers
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kilometres
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,
while
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Moscow
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Metro
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 comes second in line with 300
kilometers
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kilometres
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 and
Paris
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Metro
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 is the shortest one which is characterized by 214
kilometers
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kilometres
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 of track.
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,
Paris
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 has the most number of
stations
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 in operation with 300
stations
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, followed by
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London
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the London
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 Underground with 275
stations
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 and
Moscow
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Metro
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 with only 182
stations
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 is the
last
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 one.
Moscow
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Metro
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,
on the other hand
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, is the most crowded one with 6.5 million daily passengers. Even though
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Paris
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the Paris
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metro
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 has the shortest
metro
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 network among the two others, it comes second with 4.5 million commuters.
London
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 Underground has only about half as many daily passengers as
Moscow
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Metro
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 with only 3 million commuters. 18th November 2021
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