The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The map illustrates how the industrial area in the town of Norbiton will be changed during the development. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the area will be redesigned to include a range of convenient and health facilities and that the line layout will be altered dramatically. In more detail, the road is currently surrounded by factories and has a distance from the river. There has farmland across the river On the North side. On the West side is A town which is a little far from factories.
After development, the roadway will be divided into more ways and also
pass the river. There add a new housing building beside the farmland. All factories have changed into housing, playground, school and medical centre established on the east side of the route. The shops are opposite the medical centre. The street also
has some changes in the north. After all of the facilities have been developed, people who lived there would be enjoyed a wonderful environment in the future of Norbiton.Submitted by yeona030826 on
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