Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development. Some people think that financial aid is important. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

The state which is not developed is always looking for the brace from the world's wellness societies.
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groups provide both economic as well as moral
support
to needy nations. A pool of thought says that financial help is more valuable. On other hand, a group of people believe that practical and moral
support
is more important. I firmly stand with the
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notion. Below mentioned paragraphs will explain my
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Firstly
, Underdevelop states need more
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to stand structures which can enhance the medical system and other prerequisite facilities. If, International organisations provide financial
support
to needy nations. So, it will help more to expedite the level of living of the indigenous.
For instance
, Bhutan is a
nation
where one hospital covers
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radius and if
such
a
nation
wants to improve its medical facilities
then
they need more structure. Here, advice will not work more but financial
support
can make it.
Secondly
, developing nations need more education institutes which can produce more
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and
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, again we need
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and infrastructure to meet these obligations.
For example
, one medical institute needs 900 hundred crores for establishment. If,
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such
an institute will work properly medical situation will improve automatically. In conclusion, More funds can help the
nation
to establish and maintain medical and other required institutions. In my opinion, all international organisations should release more funds for
developingnations
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developing nations
and
this
is the responsibility of
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nation
to invest
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things. so, people can get more benefits.
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