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Government money should be used to support children in school for sports rather than to support professional sports and arts that perform for the general public. To what extent do you agree?

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The pie chart and table illustrate how the police budget changed between 2011 and 2018 in the city of Briton. Generally speaking, the table gives the detailed price of the budget which is the money cost by the police and the chart shows where the money was spent. Looking at the table more clearly, the highest cost was national which was almost one-
third
 of the total in 2017 and 2018.
Furthermore
 , local taxes stand at
second
 on the budget about 100 million per. The other sources remained the same costing about 38 million in two years.
Nevertheless
, the total number increased by approximately 14 million from 2017 to 2018.
On the other hand
, most of the money was planning on the salaries of officers and staff of which the percentage was 75% in 2017 and 69% in 2018.
In contrast
, building and transport had remained in the same proportion at 17%.
Although
, spending on technology had a slight increase from 8% to 14%, which was the lowest cost in total
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