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Some say that news has no connection with most people's life and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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Nowadays,
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 and
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 are extremely advanced and developed.
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 , people still prefer
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 to
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. I believe that the
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 language is unique , and the individual can learn from it more than
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. In fact , most of the population admires several singers , musicals or writers , as they are talented and teach people feelings lessons.
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 , by listening to songs or reading a book you might feel that life is still beautiful and safe.
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,
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 and
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 seem to be bored , especially among children and adolescents that are studying at school.
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 , the way of delivering
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 is extremely soft and romantic ;
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 , the way of delivering knowledge is complex and hard.
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 ,
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 can tell us about peace of mind and how life is awesome and we should live it with happiness.
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 ,
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 and
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 will not give you any nice imagination or thoughts of your dream , it usually reflects the difficulty of learning it and understanding its terms. To conclude ,
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 can tell humans a nice speech and explain to them how their dreams are amazing and will become true soon, while modern
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 can't do that .
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