In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?

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networking sites, civilians these days demonstrate their preference for Western clothing over formal garb in several regions of the world.In my opinion,

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the media is crucial in disseminating Western influences on apparel in the era of globalization.

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, as increasingly users are pushed to Western-based products on social socializing sites, it would progressively change how the indigenous people, especially the junior generation, dress and what they choose to wear. Countless Chinese students,

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assist meet emerging worldwide domestic consumption, enabling the export of many garments made in the West.

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, those outfits are now considered the standard for looking in non-Western nations. To be sure ,effective intercultural as some kind of result enhances the host civilization, particularly in terms of attire and custom. To put it another way, various multinational stylists and models could only show collections that produced mainstream qualities when they were inspired by the West.

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, a wide variety of mixed-up outfits might be seen on the sidewalks.A perfect example is

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common it is for Japanese adolescents to wear various clothing types.

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pattern suggests that cultural globalization might increase the diversity of

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stimulating a wide range of innovative apparel in daily life

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to supporting the local fashion sector. In

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analysis,the development of mass industry and media allowed for the diversification of the host culture, particularly in terms of dress. Despite of

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each resident should be conscious of their traditional attire because the conventional importance of sort of manner must never be forgotten.