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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?

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The number of
languages
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 becomes extinct every year. It is argued that it is not that essential because fewer
languages
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 make life easier. I completely disagree with
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 idea.
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, the death of a
language
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 makes life harder because
language
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 is a carrier of knowledge.
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, when scientists discover a new plant from a particular area which is important for human disease, it had already known by those people who lived there. If their
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 disappeared
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 it would be more difficult to learn for them about that plant. So, all types of
language
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 should be preserved,
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, we could not able to gain various knowledge.
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, every
language
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 is important because it holds the unique
culture
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 of the community that speaks it.
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, Chinese
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 has a huge variety. Chinese traditional instrumental music takes as an example, we can test
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 unique music which is not available in any other
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 in the world
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 because it has a unique feature which is able to relax and calm your mind instantly.
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, tai chi has healing power for all most all diseases, people are keen to know
this
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 method and go to Wudang mountain to learn
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 technique where it comes from. If their
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 had died, it is impossible to know that method which is rare. To conclude, I believe that life will not become easier with few
languages
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 because the extinction of
language
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 would lead to a lack of knowledge.
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, all
languages
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 are vital because they are part of human
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural heritage
  • linguistic diversity
  • homogenization
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • indigenous languages
  • cognitive skills
  • social well-being
  • global communication
  • cultural identity
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