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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a partuclar time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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To some extent, I agree with the fact that a
curfew
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 should be imposed and
teenagers
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 must be home before a specific
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 at night.
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, the idea may not be fair to some
teenagers
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 who decide to be more independent. The idea of
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curfew
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 is essential for
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 because they learn how to obey rules which is necessary for their future lives and they experience a more organized life when they enter a university.
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, they learn that they cannot trust their friends as they affect each other sometimes in a bad way.
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, a 15-year-old teenager who was one of our relatives
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 decided to go out with his friends after
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 and when they decided to come back home , they crossed a roaring river which lead to their death.
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,
teenagers
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 need to understand
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 reality that streets may not be safe at night.
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, the concept of
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 may not be fair to some
teenagers
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 who want to work after school
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. Some of them go to various stores in order to
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lear
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 new skills which may help them to be more independent. Some of them try to expand their skills by doing part-
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 jobs and earning more money.
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, my younger brother is a nursery student who works in a pharmacy which is related to his major and he can earn more money to improve his life. By going out after
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,
teenagers
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 can attend some special events
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 as concerts which can help to socialize with new people and make friends. In conclusion, the idea of
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 and staying at home after a specific
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 at night is useful for some
teenagers
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 who want to waste their
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 and just have fun and is not helpful for some of them who decide to be more independent and make their lives better.
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