Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion

It is said that
individuals
would like to experience new
things
like
traveling
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travelling
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to new
places
or
eat
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eating
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different
cuisines
.
However
, other
people
are more likely to keep similar habits
such
as eating the same foods or
visit
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visiting
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the same
places
. In my opinion, I prefer to try new
things
if I have a chance. The essay will discuss both views and give a conclusion on these thoughts. On one hand, some
people
have
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attitude
on
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toward
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their lifestyle.
Firstly
,
individuals
love doing
things
that they have already known or
they
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apply
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are familiar with.
For example
, they just eat
cuisines
they know. If they are Chinese
people
, they may eat BBQ pork, they do not want to try bacon or hamburger.
Moreover
, they do not want to travel or visit
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areas that they have not been there before. They choose the lifestyle which
make
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them feel comfortable and secure.
On the other hand
, some
people
with easy-going characteristics enjoy trying different
things
.
First
and foremost, they try to eat new
cuisines
from different countries or varieties of food in
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their
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they
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the
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hometown
understand
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new cultures,
new
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and new
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tastes.
For instance
, Vietnamese sometimes eat
hamburger
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hamburgers
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rather than eating Pho on daily basis.
Furthermore
,
individuals
would like
traveling
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to travel
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or go to different
places
to explore new
things
in their life. They love and explore new
places
because they may think they learn or will know more about
cuisines
or
places
of interest. In my point of view, I like to experience or try new
things
or do new ways because I think it is beneficial for me to know new
places
,
or
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and
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new foods, or meet new
people
. To sum up, the essay discusses different sides
how
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of how
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people
think and explore new
things
and
individuals
who like to keep familiar
things
and my conclusion related to my experience.
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  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
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  • Fulfilling
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