Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion

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It is said that

individuals

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would like to experience new

things

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traveling

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to new

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eat

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different

cuisines

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, other

people

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are more likely to keep similar habits

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as eating the same foods or

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the same

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. In my opinion, I prefer to try new

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if I have a chance. The essay will discuss both views and give a conclusion on these thoughts. On one hand, some

people

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have

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attitude

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their lifestyle.

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individuals

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love doing

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that they have already known or

they

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apply

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are familiar with.

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, they just eat

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they know. If they are Chinese

people

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, they may eat BBQ pork, they do not want to try bacon or hamburger.

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, they do not want to travel or visit

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areas that they have not been there before. They choose the lifestyle which

make

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them feel comfortable and secure.

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, some

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with easy-going characteristics enjoy trying different

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and foremost, they try to eat new

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from different countries or varieties of food in

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their

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they

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the

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hometown

understand

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to understand

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new cultures,

new

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and new

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tastes.

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, Vietnamese sometimes eat

hamburger

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hamburgers

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rather than eating Pho on daily basis.

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individuals

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would like

traveling

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to travel

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or go to different

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to explore new

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in their life. They love and explore new

places

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because they may think they learn or will know more about

cuisines

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places

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of interest. In my point of view, I like to experience or try new

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or do new ways because I think it is beneficial for me to know new

places

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and

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new foods, or meet new

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. To sum up, the essay discusses different sides

how

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of how

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people

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think and explore new

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and

individuals

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who like to keep familiar

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and my conclusion related to my experience.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

305 words

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Novelty
Routine
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Enrichment
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Personal enrichment
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