Some people believe that government should spend money to provide faster public transport. Others think that there are other important priorities for public transport such as cost and environment.

These days improving public transports are essential for spending money on governments. A portion of
people
argue
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that an eco-friendly environment
more
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important than
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increasing
increaseing
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increasing
speed
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the speed
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of public
transport
.
This
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and give my opinion. Nowadays, time is very important for all.
People
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to save some time,
therefore
everyone
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most
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efficient transportation.
Beside
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that, traffic jam is
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overwhelming
overwhalming
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overwhelming
during rush hour, and
people
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preferred
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prefer
fastest
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transportaionson
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transportations
that
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particular time. For
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some
people
argue that government should spend more money
to
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on
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fastest
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the fastest
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public
transport
.
On the other hand
, a proportion of
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thought
environment
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the environment
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is more important than speedy
transport
. Their explanations are transportations affect
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people
's life. Vehicles produce carbon
that is
very harmful,
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and also
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creates a negative aspect
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our global temperature.
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speed of
transport
will
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for
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more road
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, and
increase
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an increase
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of
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transport
needs more and wider
road
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that must be needed
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deforestation
deforestration
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deforestation
. To sum up, it is clear that speed up of public
transport
is needed for short term
soluation
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solution
solutions
, but negative impact o=for long term. From my point of view
environment
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is much
important
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more important
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than
fastest
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the fastest
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transport
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