Some parents buy their children a large of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

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part

of parents

purchase

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for

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their

children

a lot of

toys

to play with them. Some people including me, believe that buying numerous

toys

is not a suitable method for

children

,

although

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others

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think

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this

will be a good approach. Providing different

toys

for your baby could lead to some serious problems.

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factories need

to

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remarkeable

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remarkable

materials and most

part

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of them extract

of

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the

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nature and

this

has a dangerous effect on the nature and

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environment

enviroment

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environment

. New

toys

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prices are

also

very high and you need to spend

substantial

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part

of your budget, but with reasonable

shopping

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you can

also

save your money and spend

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for

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children

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education or took that for their future. Different and

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variable

toys

also

make the home busy. As your child be smaller

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surely

sure

surley

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surely

they make the home condition

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worse

worser

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worse

by their

toys

in

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all side of

home

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and it will be so difficult to

gathering

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them day after day.

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if parents always buy

toys

that

children

want

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shape

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their personality badly and they think they

colud

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could

reach

to

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everything they want and in their adulthood maybe they become

depress

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for

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this

matter. Some

part

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of society and experts believe that buying a large number of

toys

is

a

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appropriate way. They

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said

shared

saied

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said

toys

can improve

childs

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child

child's

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creativity

creavity

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creativity

and playing with

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complicated

compilcated

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complicated

toys

makes them smarter and

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hard worker

hardworking

hardworker

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hardworking

and make

they

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ready for their future.

Toys

also

are a way of communication between

children

and if they have numerous

toys

then

they will be able to play together and

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learn

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lean

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about

the

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social interactions. They

also

said with various

toys

children

will be more satisfied and they will be happier. In conclusion,

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even though

eventhough

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even though

i

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am agree

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with some comments which

i

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mentioned above about buying large scales of

toys

but as

i

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wrote in the

second

paragraph it is crucial to have

a

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tolerance because

overindulegment

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overindulgent

in

this

matter makes harmful threats

for

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society.