Some people say that main environmental problems of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In our generation, even though people who live in
this
world are not only alive things, they are damaging the environment the most. The main environmental problem is the extinction of some kinds of animals and particular species of plants. On the other side, some people say that there are more significant environmental problems. From my standpoint, the leading impact of environmental problems is merely the loss of some kinds of animals and plants.
To begin
with, the most important impact of our surrounding issue kind's own wrong actions
such
as plenty of animals and plants being destroyed. The main problem of
this
impact is global warming. As we know, trees help us that they absorb carbon dioxide which is an emission of smoke from people's actions.
For example
, driving cars and using fossil fuels.
Moreover
, there are other problems with
this
issue.
However
, those other issues are not that different. But it is suitable for the state.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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