In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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is not absolute

advantages

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or

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, both of these have their reasons and

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example.

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let's talk about the advantages when you study at

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high school or university you used to think about

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I won't do any homework and the extra study

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I can just only concentrate on the views, the things happened along the travel."you will feel really relax and comfortable because you feel so

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purees at

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your high school or university life.So

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for

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students

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mental health and

also

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body health. Because you finishing

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university studies so the

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is to find a job and join it

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if you have

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experience of the

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you must learn some skills which

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insanely good for

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job

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or

you

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daily life. The

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trip

you must lose the

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opportunity

oppotunity

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opportunity

to join the

prejob

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work, it will really bad for after days working

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experience

expericence

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experience

and if you have

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trip

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compere

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the purees of the weekdays and the weekend

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will have a huge effect in

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mind you might often feel disappoint wend some bad things happened on you, even

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little things will change your emotion. All in

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even though

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trip

have

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a lots

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of disadvantage,

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I still

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prefer

perfer

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prefer

to join

this

trip

!