You are living in a University residence and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University.

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Dear

Mr.

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John I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a noise problem which is just opened

restaurant

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a restaurant

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near

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the University residence.

Although

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is the best place to eat for us

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one of the disadvantages is that the night noise there disturbs us because

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restaurant is open until midnight.

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causes me and my

neighbors

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in the residence a serious problem because at that time we can not sleep.

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can cause insomnia disease to us and

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us tired in the mornings, as well as, it is affecting the process of our studies. I am sure you will appreciate that time is a very worrying situation for us all.To resolve the problem, I would appreciate it if you could open it till 23:00 p.m but open it during the day on weekends. These are simple steps which would make us all very grateful indeed. Thank you for your attention to

this

important matter. Marry.

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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6 paragraphs

160 words

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Suitable writing tone

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The Closing

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