You are living in a University residence and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University.

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Dear

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John I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a noise problem which is just opened

restaurant

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a restaurant

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the University residence.

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is the best place to eat for us

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one of the disadvantages is that the night noise there disturbs us because

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restaurant is open until midnight.

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causes me and my

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in the residence a serious problem because at that time we can not sleep.

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can cause insomnia disease to us and

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us tired in the mornings, as well as, it is affecting the process of our studies. I am sure you will appreciate that time is a very worrying situation for us all.To resolve the problem, I would appreciate it if you could open it till 23:00 p.m but open it during the day on weekends. These are simple steps which would make us all very grateful indeed. Thank you for your attention to

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important matter. Marry.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

160 words

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You are living in a University residence and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University.

The Closing

It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some parents pressure their children to be successful in a specific field. What are the reasons for this? Is it negative or positive?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people are off the opinion that giving a good first impression at an interviewer is the key securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

It is generally observed that almost all high level jobs are done by men. Does it mean that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? Do you agree or disagree with this proposition.