Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable.

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with, a lot of

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believe that the internet is making

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chatty, but others think it is making not sociable. I agree with the

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opinion

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because a lot of

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can find common topics and

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two sides and explain why I agree with

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’s opinion. On the one hand, A great number of

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used technologies for searching

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things and the main reason

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is communication. Thanks to

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the internet

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and website we can write to others. Nowadays

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may not

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for

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strangers and

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to know them.

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to know

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other

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unnecessary

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. In fact, today’s children used smartphones very early, they want to have

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, it is actually technology for us. Because we can have fun with games and videos from

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technique.

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, from online games plenty of teenagers

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with other teenagers.

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they can be more chatty.

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, with the advent of technology,

people

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lose experience

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speaking

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communication

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with others. In fact, we tend to only speak to other

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when

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digital technology does not operate successfully.

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, human contact occurs when we call for an assistant to help us when an item is not recognised. Despite the fact that techniques are used, it is making problems with face-to-face talk. In conclusion, I agree with the

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opinion, because a large number of users

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, can make lots of friends from computer online games,

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and websites. Many

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can get

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opportunity and learn more information about

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