Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable.

To begin

with, a lot of

people

believe that the internet is making

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chatty, but others think it is making not sociable. I agree with the

first

opinion

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because a lot of

people

can find common topics and

chatting

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.

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discuss

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two sides and explain why I agree with

first

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people

’s opinion. On the one hand, A great number of

human

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used technologies for searching

information

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,

buying

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things and the main reason

it

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is communication. Thanks to

internet

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the internet

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and website we can write to others. Nowadays

people

may not

shy

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for

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strangers and

get

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to know them.

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,

get

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to know

with

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other

people

unnecessary

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. In fact, today’s children used smartphones very early, they want to have

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phone

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, it is actually technology for us. Because we can have fun with games and videos from

this

technique.

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, from online games plenty of teenagers

chatting

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with other teenagers.

Thus

they can be more chatty.

On the other hand

, with the advent of technology,

people

lose experience

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in

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speaking

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and communication

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communication

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with others. In fact, we tend to only speak to other

people

when

the

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digital technology does not operate successfully.

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, human contact occurs when we call for an assistant to help us when an item is not recognised. Despite the fact that techniques are used, it is making problems with face-to-face talk. In conclusion, I agree with the

first

opinion, because a large number of users

phone

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, can make lots of friends from computer online games,

network

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and websites. Many

people

can get

this

opportunity and learn more information about

people

.