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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays, speaking in
languages
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 other than the native one is a necessity. There are different views about why people become bilingual or multilingual. While some believe that the motivation
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 trend is travelling or working in
another
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another country
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countries
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, others consider that those are not sufficient reasons. In my opinion, it happens as
languages
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 privilege us with the ability to communicate with different communities and cultures. On the one hand, it is undeniable that if a person speaks a certain language of a country, he will be able to live in it and be allowed to have a job and travel easily there. In modern life, many
countries
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 require individuals who are applying for jobs in it to communicate efficiently
with
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 the
first
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 language of it.
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countries
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 accept employees who are certified with IELTS or TOEFL. Not only
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professional life, but
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 travelling to foreign
countries
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needs
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 the person to know how to speak with native citizens fluently to manage his daily activities including leisure,
transportations
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transportation
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, and food.
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, travelling and working are two major reasons to use different
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.
On the other hand
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, distant communication and learning can motivate individuals to be bilinguals or
multilinguals
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multilingual
. Recently, there is no need to be physically
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 meetings or courses in remote areas, but understanding other people with different tongues is necessary. For
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 reason,
persons
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people
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 are eager to learn more
languages
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.
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, people will be able to recognize
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 they are interested in when they read about them in books or magazines written in
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 native language.
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, other factors can contribute to learning other
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. In conclusion, many causes can push
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individuals to be fluent in foreign
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. They are ranging from travel purposes,
education
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to education
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, and
working
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work
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.
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, the debate regarding which is the primary will continue.
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