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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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Scientists have found that colour has a great impact on our feelings. Due to that fact, people have to pay more attention while creating a design of working places. In my opinion, choosing
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colours
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 essential thing which might affect
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different spheres
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 life.
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significant importance in our lives because they influence not only
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 employee’s
mood
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a consumer’s
mood
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pediatric hospitals have procedure rooms which are coloured in warm tones with different paintings on the walls. That helps children feel more relaxed while they are being examined by doctors.
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 a positive
mood
 and the treatment goes well,
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 will
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 feel well and the
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 will be more effective.
Moreover
, working in a cabinet with
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 chosen
colours
 helps doctors feel more concentrated during the day. There are some ways to explain how
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our health.
First
, certain
colours
 may have a special effect in some fields.
For instance
, some dentistries have their cabinet’s walls in dark tones
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 as grey or brown because It is believed that
such
colours
 help to concentrate more.
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, it helps to choose more appropriate material to fill cavities and reach high-quality results in
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treatment. To conclude,
colours
 play a giant role in our work field atmosphere,
mood
 and health. Some
colours
 are able to make a person feel relaxed, concentrated and full of energy. Personally, I think that following special colour schemes may be helpful to choose
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colours
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 a place’s design.
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