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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

Over recent years, there has been advancement in digital technology with various gadgets
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 as
computers
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, laptops, and mobile phones available for
people
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’s convenience, comfort, and benefits. Technology changed the world, did it not? While some
people
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 consider these
computers
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 had made
life
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 more feasible and beneficial to mankind, others’ perspective is that it had made
life
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 complicated and stressful;
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, I believe that with the remarkable advancement in
computers
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, there is an incredible benefit to the educational and work sector.
Computers
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 have made education more convenient through online
classes
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.
People
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 in the past had to travel far distances to attend one or two
classes
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 which lead to time-consuming and uneconomic. During unprecedented times
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 as covid 19,
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, there were many international students who could not travel back to universities due to the unavailability of working flights, resulting in studying online
classes
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. Because of these online
classes
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,
people
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 can study in their comfort zone
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 as at home, in libraries, and
café
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; thereby gaining knowledge and studying has become easier than ever before through
computers
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. On the other side,
people
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 believe that there is more harm than good in
computers
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, as it has made
people
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’s
life
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 miserable by producing dependency on it.
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 is seen in various supermarkets’ self-checkout tills, online money transfers as well as cash machines. Thereby making it stressful for some
people
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 to learn before functioning it.
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, businesses and the private sector have hugely benefited from
computers
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.
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, online marketing of their products, and online meeting with clients has made working convenient and profitable in
this
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 technical world. To sum up,
although
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 electronic gadgets have created stress and dependency on
people
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, it is undeniable that the beneficial aspect of online education, the workforce, and many various sectors made
life
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 peaceful and uncomplicated. I think with
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 ongoing advancement in technology
people
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 in the future would rely on robots for everyday activities.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual meetings
  • automation
  • repetitive tasks
  • innovation
  • cyber threats
  • data privacy
  • economic growth
  • interpersonal skills
  • adapt
  • burnout
  • dependency
  • streamlined
  • calendar apps
  • online courses
  • personal and professional development
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