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You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: What the gadget is What you think about it Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

#gadget #home #friend #advice #alternatives
Hello Dave , Have a nice day . I saw your message
this
 morning and you need some suggestions from me before going to buy a new electric cooker for your family. I bought
this
last
 couple of months ago.
Although
 it is a cooker , its functionalities are amazing and fantastic . Obviously, we can use
this
 not only as a cooker but
also
 as an oven at the same time . In a nutshell, we can spend less time preparing many dishes easily .
Therefore
 , I strongly recommend you buy it ,especially
this
 month because you will get a 50% cash back bonus.
Moreover
 , I can refer you to get some additional presents from them as well
such
 as free cooking ingredients. If you are thinking to own it , I would suggest you buy the latest one because it comes with a timer so you do not need to worry about overcooking . Well,
that is
 all I am going to suggest to you . I hope
this
 could help you . All the best , Thomas
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