A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, •describe what this book was about, •explain how this book influenced you, •say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear sir or madam, I am writing to you regarding the contribution of the
book
that influenced me the most. The
book
that inspired me the most is called "Ikigai", it's about the secret to Japanese long living and how their elders can still work without problems in their eighties. While I was reading the
book
I noticed that the secret was to work hard, drink and eat healthily, and
also
have a simple routine of exercise that not only gives you the power to work properly but
also
be happier in life and remain younger.
Furthermore
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I think
this
book
will inspire many because ageing is a common concern and with methods and examples in
this
book
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people can have a longer life span, and a healthier life. Sincerely, Ali
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