Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

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According to research, we are born with some characteristics which have more influence on our personality and development than other experiences we get throughout
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get more influence and I will
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include my perspective in the conclusion. To commence with,
people
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are born with various features and qualities, which other
people
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do not have and it makes them a unique
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on earth.
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, some individuals are born with some skills, by which they can do better than other humans,
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, some students have the skill to quickly understand and solve a problem whereas others require more practice and learning to solve any problem.
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, anyone's personality
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by their looks and style which they get by birth and if they change themselves by applying some beauty products
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it would be considered as the development or influence from
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are not born stars or influencers, they have done many works and have given many efforts and
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they failed before and gained much experience and built an empire through which they are recognized by
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, some students are very weak in some subjects and later they do great in those subjects by giving effort and time to
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particular subjects in which they were weak.
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, practice is the key to achieving skills that helps an individual to achieve the goal, if some are not born with special skills
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hard work and dedication may help them to reach
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their desired destination. In conclusion, in my opinion, some individuals are born with some qualities which make them
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unique person but their experience throughout
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influences individuals more and they make their
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better by working hard.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nature vs. nurture debate
  • genetic inheritance
  • personality traits
  • behavior patterns
  • heritability
  • twins studies
  • malleable characteristics
  • upbringing
  • environmental influences
  • critical periods
  • language acquisition
  • worldview
  • innate traits
  • personal experiences
  • psychological development
  • epigenetics
  • adaptive behaviors
  • cultural imprinting
  • temperament
  • social conditioning
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