In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. Why is this happening? What measures could be taken to ensure they do not disappear?
Conventional cultural
celebrations
are an integral part of any culture. They, in some countries, are seen diminishing. This
essay will discuss the cause of this
trend and some solutions that may curb the situation.
The key reason for this
decreasing interest within the community for
Change preposition
in
such
celebrations
has been the burden caused by them. The reason for this
is that it needs more preparation, space and funds. For instance
, Chinese New Year celebrations
comprises
Change the verb form
comprise
of
many processions which cause severe traffic jams in busy streets, let alone the heavy cost of preparation including those to costumes. Even Change preposition
apply
this
more then
4000 years old traditional festival is not widely celebrated due to Correct your spelling
than
Correct your spelling
this
tis
reason. Correct your spelling
this
Moreover
, the
meeting friends and relatives had been the most important part of any cultural Correct article usage
apply
celebrations
. Nowadays, all lead busy lifestyles and Fix the agreement mistake
celebration
contacting
their families and friends Wrong verb form
contact
are
done on the go using their mobile phones. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Therefore
, meeting up Change preposition
with them
them
Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
a cultural festival is not a requirement Change preposition
at
any more
.
Correct your spelling
anymore
However
, these long-established festivals are an important aspect of local cultures and therefore
, should not be abandoned. This
demands the involvement of governments and wider
community who could take initiatives to address the root causes of Correct article usage
the wider
peoples
lethargy towards these festivities. Communities, Change noun form
people's
for instance
, can change the processions to have them in a large stadium rather than having them on the streets. The governments can extend their support by providing funds and facilities to hold them in a closed space. These steps would cause the continuity of these traditional events.
In conclusion, Add a hyphen
long-established
long established
cultural festivities are ignored worldwide and governments and communities could make some contributions to maintain these traditions without being Add a hyphen
long-established
died
.Replace the word
dead
Submitted by lankadeva on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!