In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. Why is this happening? What measures could be taken to ensure they do not disappear?

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Conventional cultural
celebrations
are an integral part of any culture. They, in some countries, are seen diminishing.
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essay will discuss the cause of
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trend and some solutions that may curb the situation. The key reason for
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decreasing interest within the community
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such
celebrations
has been the burden caused by them. The reason for
this
is that it needs more preparation, space and funds.
For instance
, Chinese New Year
celebrations
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of
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many processions which cause severe traffic jams in busy streets, let alone the heavy cost of preparation including those to costumes. Even
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4000 years old traditional festival is not widely celebrated due to
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reason.
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meeting friends and relatives had been the most important part of any cultural
celebrations
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. Nowadays, all lead busy lifestyles and
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their families and friends
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done on the go using their mobile phones.
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a cultural festival is not a requirement
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.
However
, these long-established festivals are an important aspect of local cultures and
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, should not be abandoned.
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demands the involvement of governments and
wider
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community who could take initiatives to address the root causes of
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lethargy towards these festivities. Communities,
for instance
, can change the processions to have them in a large stadium rather than having them on the streets. The governments can extend their support by providing funds and facilities to hold them in a closed space. These steps would cause the continuity of these traditional events. In conclusion,
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cultural festivities are ignored worldwide and governments and communities could make some contributions to maintain these traditions without being
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