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Some people think that youngsters should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Are disadvantages of this requirement greater than the benefits for the community and individuals?

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The young generation is an important asset for any nation. There are
people
 who hold the opinion that young
people
 should not pay remuneration for providing services to society. I believe that
this
 trend has more merits than demerits. There are several advantages for young
people
 if they have started helping individuals in society.
To begin
 with,
this
 will encourage the youth to enhance their self-confidence. They have started interacting with various groups of
people
 and take active participation in community work building self-confidence among the
youngsters
.
Secondly
, from the employers' perspective, these
people
 are ready to work in a corporate environment as they have prior experience. These
youngsters
 could perform better in their job and have great communication skills than the freshers from the market.
Moreover
, prior knowledge of work in the same field enhances the opportunity for employment and at the beginning of their carrier, they can earn a good pay scale which motivates them to perform excellently in their job. The creativity of younger
people
 could improve while participating in
such
 events. There are
people
 who claim that
this
 trend would hamper the development of teenagers, as they are constantly engaging in
such
 events causing poor academic performance.
However
, if they utilise the time appropriately
this
 issue can be resolved. In conclusion, I believe that if
youngsters
 are helping the community free of cost would help
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both society
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both society
 and individuals. There would be less crime in society as
youngsters
 are working.
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