You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. Write 150 words. In your letter: -Explain the important event -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Lora, How are you doing? I hope my letter finds you in the best of health. I know you must be looking forward to my visit to your place,

however

, an important and urgent matter just came up. My daughter Sara has her annual parent-teacher meeting at her school and its date coincides with the dates I was planning to visit you.

Therefore

, we need to postpone our plan. You must understand that being a single parent I need to be there for my child 24/7 because I am all she has. I am so sorry for the cancellation of our meet-up, yet I assure you I will make it up to you somehow. I would love to come by

month if you are available by

then

In addition

, I will

also

book my train tickets in advance if you give me a green signal. Really cannot wait to have a cup of tea with my childhood friend and talk about our college days just to recall our old times. I am eagerly waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Rose.

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