Many people feel the urban encivronments are more unhealthy than they have ever been What do you think are the main causes of the problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem ?
It is thought that the city environment of today is more dangerous for public health than ever. The main causes of
this
issue are Linking Words
air
pollution because of the heavy traffic and the huge amount of industrial Use synonyms
waste
in urban areas. Use synonyms
However
, encouraging society to use public transport and taking legal measures to decrease Linking Words
waste
might solve Use synonyms
this
problem.
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Firstly
, it is obvious that urban range are more crowded than rural areas and many city dwellers prefer driving to using public transportation systems Linking Words
such
as buses or subways. Linking Words
As a result
, heavy traffic is common almost every hour of the day. Linking Words
However
, the amount of carbon emission which cars release into the atmosphere is significantly higher than twenty years ago since automobiles cheaper than they used to be. So, Linking Words
air
pollution is getting higher and higher every day and it causes unhealthy city conditions for the public. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, many industrial factories dispose of their Linking Words
waste
to nature without surveying and Use synonyms
water
contamination is increasing as well.
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Nevertheless
, if the governments encourage people to use public transport systems by offering more functional and clean vehicles than before, the number of cars will drop as well as the carbon footprints. Linking Words
Thus
, the number of pollutants Linking Words
such
as carbon will diminish and the weather quality will rise. Linking Words
Moreover
, there is no doubt that the responsibility for inspecting factories' Linking Words
waste
belongs to the authorities. Use synonyms
In other words
, states must check the disposal sites of industries and close them if it is necessary. Linking Words
Therefore
, many producers have to take measures to protect themselves by being legally closed so the Linking Words
water
sources will remain clean Use synonyms
for example
.
To conclude, the circumstances of urban areas are more unhealthy than before because of the outrageous number of cars and uncontrolled industrial wastes which cause Linking Words
air
and Use synonyms
water
corruption. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, governments can prevent Linking Words
this
issue by promoting public transportation to people in order to decrease Linking Words
air
pollution and inspecting methods of factories to prevent Use synonyms
water
contamination.Use synonyms
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