First Impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interview is the key to securing a goog job. TO what extend do you agree?

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sense and
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myriad
of
people
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routine . Few
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individuals
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say that giving
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interview
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interview
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company .
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do not completely agree with
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would
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would
like to give my opinion and view in
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essay .
Firstly
, having a good dressing sense can keep you energetic and it
also
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person
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look in
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also
.
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people
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human beings
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usually
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usually
love to wear and look like a
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professional
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professional
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and they love to wear formal wear nowadays .
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wrong to say some of the big companies see the personality of being and by that a man/
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can
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.
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society
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society
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.
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50% of
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reputation
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society and work in government and corporate job as well and because of that
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every
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respect
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respect
to mankind .
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we seldom give a thought to ponder over
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side of the essay nepotism plays
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role in dressing style and in
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the job
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also
.
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of employment not only depends on good adorning it
also
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on general knowledge .
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their
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their
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collected money on one thing .
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getting
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career
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career
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customed
some
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fetal death. To cite an example , As per
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article published in "
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salary
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because of not being well stylish in
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like THE UNITED KINGDOM.
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, it can be
finally
commented that
although
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booming
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due to
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and overuse of apparel . I am
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there will not a single
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business
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individuals
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with
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and high thinking in Future .
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