Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result we cannot trust information we read there. To what extend do you agree?
In our world
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statement because it is not possible to generalize this
because there multiple
reliable and scientifically proven sources of information.
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are various
such
as BBC, CNN or ARD which provide 100 percent
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Furthermore
on Instagram for example
so many topics are discussed such
as “mental health and climate change”. Hence
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