Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result we cannot trust information we read there. To what extend do you agree?

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possibilities to post news on the internet. It is believed that we
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. In my opinion, I disagree with
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reliable and scientifically proven sources of information. One reason it’s impossible to say that every
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inforamtion
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information
we find on the web is untrustworthy or false
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this
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is simply not true. There
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information sections
such
as BBC, CNN or ARD which provide 100
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reliable online content. That’s because they are strictly controlled and checked by the government before they even release any article or recording.
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a study done in the US in NYC showed that there is an error rate of approximately 0,2
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in the New York times every month,
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rate is significantly low compared to others. Another point is that people
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themselves need to check if the information they read
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from a trustworthy source.
Furthermore
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so many topics are discussed
such
as “mental health and climate change”.
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men and women need to do more research on what is correct and what
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instead
of just relying on those words.
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it would be beneficial to discuss certain topics with other people or friends
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to get more knowledge and reassurance. In
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I believe that people can trust certain sources on the web they just have to know which and if they are not sure about certain
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they need to do research by themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Verification
  • Misinformation
  • Disinformation
  • Journalistic standards
  • Algorithm
  • Engagement
  • Source discernment
  • Anonymity
  • Traditional news outlets
  • AI and machine learning
  • Reliable sources
  • Unverified information
  • Amplification
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