Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result we cannot trust information we read there. To what extend do you agree?

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In our world

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endless

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possibilities to post news on the internet. It is believed that we

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cannot relay and trust those

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informations

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. In my opinion, I disagree with

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statement because it is not possible to generalize

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because there

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reliable and scientifically proven sources of information. One reason it’s impossible to say that every

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information

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inforamtion

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we find on the web is untrustworthy or false

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is simply not true. There

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information sections

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as BBC, CNN or ARD which provide 100

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reliable online content. That’s because they are strictly controlled and checked by the government before they even release any article or recording.

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example

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a study done in the US in NYC showed that there is an error rate of approximately 0,2

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in the New York times every month,

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rate is significantly low compared to others. Another point is that people

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themselves need to check if the information they read

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from a trustworthy source.

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on Instagram

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so many topics are discussed

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as “mental health and climate change”.

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men and women need to do more research on what is correct and what

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instead

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of just relying on those words.

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it would be beneficial to discuss certain topics with other people or friends

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to get more knowledge and reassurance. In

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I believe that people can trust certain sources on the web they just have to know which and if they are not sure about certain

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they need to do research by themselves.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

263 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Credibility
Verification
Misinformation
Disinformation
Journalistic standards
Algorithm
Engagement
Source discernment
Anonymity
Traditional news outlets
AI and machine learning
Reliable sources
Unverified information
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