The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps compare the present and future changes in an industrial
area
in the town of Norbiton.
According to
the pictures, there are three significant differences: road, living
area
, and infrastructure.
Firstly
, the main road in the industrial
area
is built in the south of the river.
However
, it plans to build a bridge across the river and connect to the new housing
area
where is farmland at present.
Secondly
, on the industrial zone's south side, a new roundabout will be made in the south of the old one.
Moreover
, there is a new road on the west side of the bigger roundabout that connects two housing areas. It can be seen that six factories nowadays are going to be housing areas.
In addition
, one factory located in the east of Norbiton is planned to establish a school. On the west side of the school, a new playground will be built between two housing areas.
Furthermore
, shops and a medical centre will be opened between two roundabouts in the planned future development.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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