Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?

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of jobs that have been accomplished by
individuals
are now being completed by
robots
in the places where
individuals
live and work. From my point of view, utilizing
robots
in living areas and workplaces is a positive development and
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first
reason why it is
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positive is that artificial
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can make any kind of
tasks
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to be more efficient rather than humans since they do not get tired, do not be late to their workplaces and even do not require any additional
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expences
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such
as eating, buying clothes and so on like humans.
Furthermore
, another advantageous side of using
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robots
is their cost since artificial
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are much cheaper than
individuals
and their cost is now decreasing.
In addition
to
this
,
this
kind of
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can be used in
a situations
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situations
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where people’s lives are in danger.
For example
, the government of the UK has announced to
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humanoid
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robots
in situations where
humans’
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life can be in danger
such
as some environmental conditions like space or mines might be murderous places for people. To be sure,
robots
are programmed to do only certain
tasks
,
therefore
they can not handle unexpected situations and
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literally
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they do not have any emotions and
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can influence negatively
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the
workplaces
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environment.
Moreover
, providing
robots
with certain jobs can increase the
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unemployment
unemployement
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unemployment
rates
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the
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society since these days most
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large
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companies are using
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artificial
intelligences
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to accomplish their
tasks
instead
of
individuals
.
For example
, nowadays majority of the industries are purchasing
robots
rather than providing humans with jobs because of their affordable price and efficiency and
as a result
of
this
, many people are suffering from unemployment. To conclude, having weighed everything mentioned up, I can come to the conclusion with that utilizing artificial intelligence in houses and offices is not a negative development in human history,
instead
, despite the obvious negative sides of
this
, it allows us to increase
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the efficiency of the task
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tasks
efficiency.
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