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Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, a number of individuals prefer using some kind of
devices
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device
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such
 as
laptop
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a laptop
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 or phone to transact
money
 online. From my point of ,view
this
 is a positive perspective.
This
day
, online
money
 sending is getting popular ,especially in big and urbanized countries, because
this
 is one of the most popular and most common ways to transact
money
 to someone, whenever people want to do it, when or where. A number of international and national banks are trying to work online by using their own online websites or applications to service clients. On the other ,hand there can be situations when a person is not able to go even to the nearest
bank
 because of his or her time management or working process, so at that time they are able to transfer
money
 by using his or her device, from other side banks are always out of work on Saturdays or Sundays, perhaps
this
 is the main reason why people prefer using online
bank
 transaction services.
However
, despite online transfers is getting popular, it does not mean almost everyone is able to use online
bank
 accounts by themselves, if there will be transacted a huge amount of
money
, that time they need help from
bank
 experts, because almost every
day
,every
third
 person is losing his or her
money
 while transacting it, of ,course internet hackers. These kinds of online thieves are easily able to steal individuals'
bank
 accounts if they know the verification codes of users, perhaps so that many people are afraid of these guys and try to have a deal with international or national banks. In conclusion, modern technology is getting more popular7
day
 by
day
, so it requires its own modern users too.
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