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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
In
this
 era of modernization and digitization, any
information
 reaches
to
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people
 within a span of minutes or seconds. There is hardly anything left that could not be found on the internet that previously used to be available in
the
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paper form only. I strongly agree with the fact that in the coming years, the use of news magazines or any physical source of
information
 would be obsoleted. The major reason
of
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this
 happening is that the newspaper publishes the
information
 which is latest but not
of
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 the same day. The details found in the papers are at least a day old.
For instance
, if a celebrity or a famous person was killed or died, the newsletter printing that headline would reach
to
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folks the
next
 day,
although
 most of the
people
 would already know about it via online resources.
Moreover
, all sorts of data
is
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 available on Wikipedia, Twitter and other sites reducing the need of paying for resources.
In addition
, the books have
also
 been converted into e-books so individuals can easily download
it
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 free of cost, avoiding the hassle of going to a store, purchasing
it
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 and
then
 carrying it. Another reason
of
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 the newspapers
being
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archaic
archiac
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 is that everything has been digitalized and individuals who used to search apartments ads or scholarships now can easily navigate to various websites and find their desired content.
For example
, there is a specific section of apartment or
scholarships
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advertisements
advertisments
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advertisements
 in the papers, while the websites contain infinite data.
As a result
,
people
 are well-aware of educational opportunities and
houses
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 available. To put it in a nutshell, it is an undeniable fact that
people
 will be able to access everything
information
 online without the need of investing their own money. In my opinion,
this
 is the best way to keep yourself up-to-date about the latest trends and happenings going around.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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