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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Nowadays, more and more people have possessed their own
computer
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 and smartphone.
As a result
, it is convenient for them to handle their affairs at
home
.
However
, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do
this
. In the following, I will discuss some of the reasons
about
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 the advantages and disadvantages of working at
home
 and make a trade-off. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of working at
home
. One main positive aspect is
more
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 freedom the workers have. At
home
, workers can control their time more independently.
For example
, they maybe have children in their family, so
it’s
 convenient for them to take care of their children and
to
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do some housework.
It’s
 less monotonous than doing the same work all day long.
However
, it
also
 has some disadvantages
of
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 working at
home
.
First
 of all,
it’s
 hard for most
of
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people
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the people
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 to pay attention to a job for a long time without staying at
office
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. Working at
home
 will decrease their efficiency of working. Since
it’s
 a
cozy
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 place. There is a bed for napping,
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television for watching. There are lots of temptations
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 people’s attention.
Furthermore
,
it
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 will lose lots of relationships
between
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 their colleagues. People will have less interaction if they work at
home
 alone.
Their
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 will lose many chances to cooperate and have a conversation face to face.
As a result
, maybe they will miss a nice friendship and
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lack
of
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teamwork skills. In conclusion,
although
 there are positives and negatives related to working at
home
, I do believe that there are more negative aspects.
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