137. Learning in one’s native tongue yields better school scores than learning in a medium language. Do you agree or disagree? Argue your point of view.

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137. Learning in one’s native tongue yields better school scores than learning in a medium language. Do you agree or disagree? Argue your point of view.

Fully explain your ideas

You agreed to take a particular job over the summer, but due to unforeseen circumstances, you can no longer take the position. Write a letter including: - Explaining your situation - An apology - Express that you would be interested in the position next summer

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

How did you choose your proposed course and institution?

The only way to improve the safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

in your opinion how can government of each country eradicate or lesson the crimes committed by their own people use specific reasons and details to support your answer