137. Learning in one’s native tongue yields better school scores than learning in a medium language. Do you agree or disagree? Argue your point of view.

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effort and

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that learning

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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137. Learning in one’s native tongue yields better school scores than learning in a medium language. Do you agree or disagree? Argue your point of view.

Fully explain your ideas

The advantages provided by English as a global language will continue to outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement

Today much of the food people eat get imported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology has brought so many changes that modern lifestyle are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Do you think the positive effects of technology outweigh its disadvantages?