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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong in an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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In the contemporary era, there is a heated debate over the issue that some people believe
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children
 should learn about negative and positive
things
 in their childhood and penalties should be given in order to teach them. A majority of society
favors
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 it, but the rest goes
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 to it. In
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 to a logical conclusion.
First
 of all, kids are a very delicate creation of God and they do not much know about moral values
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in
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 early age. Parents should do
a high efforts
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 to teach them the distinction
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 right and wrong and punishment should be completely prohibited in
this
 regard.
For example
, if a kid
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 some lines on
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 painted wall,
instead
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, you should give him a wipe to clean the wall. By
this
 method, he
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 aware about the thing that he
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a
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wrong thing, so he had to clean his mass.
Secondly
,
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in
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 early age,
children
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things
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then
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 adults. It is because they are
sharp
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learner
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 at that time. So if you want to teach them moral values and good manners, you can teach them with the help of different activities.
For instance
, if you want to teach the difference
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 truth and lie to your child, you can tell them a story
which
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based on the moral of speaking
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. In
this
 way, your child could learn new
things
 without
punishments
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. In my opinion, people can teach their
children
 about many new
things
 without penalties if they use
correct
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 methods. To recapitulate, because of
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 statement, we may safely conclude that
children
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things
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 only need to educate their elders to deal with them properly and appropriately.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • punishment
  • positive reinforcement
  • consequences
  • time-outs
  • removal of privileges
  • open communication
  • clear expectations
  • consistency
  • fairness
  • disciplinary action
  • proportionate
  • moral values
  • internalization
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