Some experts suggest people a method to solve the environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel and all vehicles. To what extent do you agree with this point? And make comparision where relevant

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It is suggested by experts that the cost of
fuels
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and all vehicles should be increased in response to the increasing severity of environmental problems. As far as I am concerned, I tend to believe
this
method definitely can benefit the whole society while potential negative influences
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about by
this
can not be ignored. On the one hand, it is obvious that increasing the cost of
fuel
and all vehicles can resolve the issue of environmental preservation to some extent.
Firstly
, with the increasing
price
of
fuel
, working
people
who usually drive private
cars
to commute between workplaces and home will be more likely to take public
transport
alternately.
Therefore
, the exhaust gas released by private
cars
will be reduced, which somehow is a way to respond to
air
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pollution issue.
Secondly
, the adjustment of
car
prices will potentially influence individuals' determination on purchasing a
car
. If they figure out the
price
of owning a
car
and additional expense is much more expensive than taking public
transport
, they would more likely to choose public
transport
such
as trams, and buses, in order to avoid additional expenditure. And
as a result
, fewer
cars
running on roads means less exhaust air release.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages of increasing
fuel
costs and vehicles
price
cannot be ignored. The main reason for
this
view is that
this
kind of method will potentially lead
people
who regarded private
cars
as a must to experience financial burden, especially for those working individuals who live far away from workplaces and earn
low
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income, as their disposable income is limited. Another reason for
this
view is that it is a fact that
people
who owned
cars
already will still choose to commute by
car
if the adjusted
fuel
price
is still affordable. As they have already gotten used to commuting by
car
and insist on it, and
as a result
, it does not make any difference to
this
group of
people
To sum up, I tend to believe
this
method is a feasible solution in response to air pollution.
However
, some
people
will disadvantage from it and other appropriate methods
such
as subsidising
people
to take public
transport
and hybrid
cars
users would probably be an alternative in responding to
this
topic.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emissions
  • renewable energy
  • public transportation
  • alternative energy
  • economic impact
  • regressive measure
  • social mobility
  • incentives
  • green technology
  • consumption
  • environmental impact
  • commute
  • stricter regulations
  • disproportionately
  • sustainability
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