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in many countries large amounts of food are wasted, why do you think people waste food in this way ? what can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away ?

#countries #amounts #food #people #waste #amount
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these days,
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 of
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 is a general problem for several countries. people have some reason to
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food
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, might they think the
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 had been insufficient to eat. have several ways to reduce large of
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 one study showed, that preparing and over-serving large portions of
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 shows love for friends and family, the fact
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 idea is definitely wrong. other side people are afraid of their safety about getting poisoning by any products that have passed their expiration dates. sometimes people buy lots of
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 without appropriately making plans on when and how the
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 will be prepared for consumption.
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, the solution is to reduce
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 in our household. we can make an inventory and take stock of
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 as the pantry ,refrigerator and freezer before going to the store to buy supplies of our
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 creating a meal plan with ingredients for our stock ,
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 purchasing imperfect vegetables or fruits, the shape of the
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 we buy does not impact the taste and
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 upcycling our leftover
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 to be compos for our
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. in summary one of the causes of global warming is the
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 of
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.
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food
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 has a substantial impact on the environment, we need to shop our bad habits for the
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